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Engagement writing coach

Our seven Engagement pages as they stand on the wiki, with notes in the margin. Each note sits beside a passage from a team that won the matching iGEM special prize in 2023, 2024 or 2025, so you can see how they wrote the same part.

Best Integrated Human Practices

Integrated Human Practices

The raw material is at winner level: about 18 dated expert meetings, Before/After lists, second visits that report what changed, and a bioreactor story told as a chain of questions. The writing around it holds the page back: a generic opening, entries printed up to three times, change slots full of 'we learned' and 'consider', claims in the survey and Conclusion sections that go past the evidence, and several facts that disagree with the Entrepreneurship, Laws and Data Physicalization pages.

Fix firstFix the facts that disagree with other pages: kill switch, target stresses, expansion countries, the printer-and-ink analogy, the target farmer, and which booth the 62-person survey covered.

Compared withNYU-Abu-Dhabi 2025, WageningenUR 2025, JU-Krakow 2024, Bielefeld-CeBiTec 2024, HUST-China 2023, SDU-Denmark 2023

  • Praise 11
  • Restructure 8
  • Cut 7
  • Clarify 5
  • Mistake 12
  • Add 7
Best Education

Education

Your page has something most winners lack: pre- and post-surveys at every school level, and tables that pair each piece of feedback with the change you made. What holds it back is order and accuracy. Your reason for teaching sits in section 4, each school level is told twice (sections 4 and 5), and about twenty numbers, labels and captions disagree with each other.

Fix firstRewrite the abstract sheet, the first thing a judge reads. Open with who you taught and how many, and say which school level each number comes from (the 80% is elementary, the 30% is junior high). Bold a result with a number.

Compared withQueens-Canada 2025, Heidelberg 2025, CityU-HongKong 2024, Aachen 2024, IISER-Pune-India 2023, EPFL 2023

  • Praise 10
  • Restructure 6
  • Cut 1
  • Clarify 6
  • Mistake 12
  • Add 4
Best Entrepreneurship

Entrepreneurship

This is a real business plan, not a sketch: the six-year roadmap, the regulatory comparison, the nine risks with mitigations and the stakeholder grid already answer more of the ballot than two of the seven winning pages did. What holds it back is not missing work but disagreement inside the work. Prices, dates, markets, SDG numbers, the third protein and the kill switch each appear in two or three different versions across this page and the Laws, Human Practices, Sustainability and Geospatial pages, and a judge who notices one stops trusting the rest.

Fix firstFix the price. Pick one number and one currency, and make section 2.1, the Our solution box, section 6.2 and the Geospatial page's NT$30,000 agree.

Compared withSUSTech-BIO 2025, UNILausanne 2025, WageningenUR 2025, Uni-Padua-IT 2024, UToronto 2024, Tec-Chihuahua 2023, Leiden 2023

  • Praise 15
  • Restructure 5
  • Cut 4
  • Clarify 7
  • Mistake 9
  • Add 5
Best Sustainable Development Impact

Sustainability

The page picks four goals with a clear selection story and names one real risk from a named farmer, which some winners never do. It falls short of the winners where judges check each goal: no target numbers, stakeholders without names or changes, almost no numbers about your own work, and nothing on other SDGs. Several claims also contradict ReLeaf's Results, Plants, Entrepreneurship, Education and Human Practices pages.

Fix firstFix the claims that contradict other pages: the Arabidopsis "proven" claim, "entirely natural" protectants, the SDG list, 5 against 6 years, three schools against four visits, organic against natural.

Compared withEPFL 2025, Aalto-Helsinki 2025, UBC-Vancouver 2024, UZurich 2024, Thessaloniki 2023, Heidelberg 2023

  • Praise 9
  • Restructure 1
  • Clarify 3
  • Add 3
Integrated Human Practices, Safety and Security

Laws and Regulations

This is already a stronger regulatory page than anything in the casebook on structure: the system is split into three components, every classification is hedged, and a whole section lists what is still unconfirmed. It falls behind the winners on people and on proof. One industry briefing stands in for all stakeholders, no regulator was asked anything, no rule is cited by article, and no design change on the page is traced to a rule. Several claims also disagree with the Entrepreneurship and Geospatial Analysis pages, which is the fastest way to lose a judge's trust on legal writing.

Fix firstFix the page-to-page contradictions first, starting with the market order, which the new abstract sheet now shows on the first screen: EU second here against the Philippines first and the EU at year 5.5 on Entrepreneurship. Then the 30-day fertilizer timeline and "absolute containment" certification on Entrepreneurship, ACCD heat against the salinity evidence and the organic exclusion on Geospatial Analysis, the missing NaD1, and BoPEP4 against BoPep4.

Compared withMarburg 2024, WageningenUR 2025, UZurich 2024, Waterloo 2024

  • Praise 8
  • Restructure 3
  • Cut 2
  • Clarify 3
  • Mistake 3
  • Add 2
Integrated Human Practices, Sustainable Development

Geospatial Analysis

This page does the one thing no precedent GIS page manages: it says what the maps decided. The routing model, the per-hectare unit counts and the farmers' association ownership conclusion form a chain a judge can follow, and section 8 gives other teams something reusable. It falls short where judges check the work: there is no method or data section, so no reader can rebuild a single layer, and the same figure often appears twice with two values.

Fix firstMake every repeated number agree: the small-farm share (99.18%, but 99% in 4.4), the farmed-land share (86.18%, 86%), the warming period (1991, 1999, 1980), the fertilizer intensity (300 kg/ha, 449 kg/ha) and the sandy-loam cost multiple. Check each one against Entrepreneurship and Sustainability as well.

Compared withMarburg 2024, IISER-Pune-India 2022, XJTLU-CHINA 2025

  • Praise 9
  • Restructure 3
  • Cut 5
  • Clarify 2
  • Mistake 5
  • Add 5
Education, Integrated Human Practices

Data Physicalization

Your page has evidence most outreach pages lack: a knowledge question with a right answer, counts for every option, and a question about the map itself. What holds it back is repetition and facts that do not match. The map and sound exhibit are described three or four times, the survey is presented as being about this booth when it covered the whole event, and several details disagree with each other or with the IHP and Geospatial pages.

Fix firstSay once, in the abstract and at the start of the Impact section, that the survey covered all six booths, and mark which results are about the map. Then match the labels and categories to the IHP page.

Compared withthe Education and Integrated Human Practices winners

  • Praise 7
  • Restructure 1
  • Cut 3
  • Clarify 5
  • Mistake 5
  • Add 2

The winners we compare against

Undergrad and overgrad winners of four iGEM special prizes, 2023 to 2025. Each name opens the page that won the prize; each year opens iGEM's results for that year. In 2025 the overgrad Best Entrepreneurship prize was shared.

Law and GIS pages

No prize covers these pages, so their notes quote the closest pages we found. Data Physicalization is compared with the Education and Integrated Human Practices winners.

TeamUsed forPageStanding
Marburg 2024Laws and Regulations · Geospatial AnalysisGISLegal and politicalBest Integrated Human Practices nominee
WageningenUR 2025Laws and RegulationsHuman PracticesBest Integrated Human Practices and Best Entrepreneurship winner
UZurich 2024Laws and RegulationsIntegrated Human PracticesBest Sustainable Development Impact winner
Waterloo 2024Laws and RegulationsPolicy ResearchNo award
IISER-Pune-India 2022Geospatial AnalysisModelNo award
XJTLU-CHINA 2025Geospatial AnalysisModelNo award

All iGEM wiki text is licensed CC BY 4.0. Every quoted passage in the notes links to its source page.

Facts that disagree between pages

A judge who reads two pages will notice these. Agree on one version as a team, then fix every page that carries the other.

The six kinds of note

Pages as they stood on the ReLeaf wiki at commit c79a7ce, 2026-10-13.